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    dots Submission Name: Life&Death of Poetsdots
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    Author: Scribner
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 131/134/18
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       A little homage to those that came before.


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    dotsLife&Death of Poetsdots
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    It's late at night.
    The world slumbers peacefully,
    but I am restless.
    I plunder the bookcase for an ancient tome.
    Thumbing through it's fragile, jaundice pages
    the dead speak to me.
    Their musky breath rise from the page,
    carrying their whispered wisdom
    across the centuries seperating us.
    There is no past. No future.
    Only the eternal present
    as they share with me their lives
    and their experiences.
    They are not dead,
    just asleep on the page.
    "Wake up tired troubadours
    and sing your song of life."
    They are immortal
    for as long as words remain.




    Submitted on 2004-01-29 15:56:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "They are immortal
    for as long as words remain."

    I love this line, it sums up your poem in that last line. This line really does it for me!

    You have a great way of keeping your poems simple, yet they are compelling and very clear. I am loving your work!

    Lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by Lisa-Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      this is an awsome poem i love the wording the topic and everything....

    i had to move half the library into my room for that reason

    Da Grim Reaperesssss
    | Posted on 2006-05-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      Man this one is truly masterful, " There is no past, no future. Only the eternal present" that is genius. Inspirational.
    Liam
    | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by liamzamudio | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...that's very interesting. I know everyone works from some inspirsation, and i must ask-what is yours?
    | Posted on 2004-02-12 00:00:00 | by deadlydarkdevil | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful a mind that you hid from me what a shame. Selfishly hiding your talent from me lol
    | Posted on 2004-01-31 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice, but I think it should be jaundiced because jaundice is a noun.
    | Posted on 2004-01-30 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      They are not dead, just asleep on the page...

    WOW! Fav's list, that's all I can say to that! <><
    | Posted on 2004-01-29 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]


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