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    Author: Fernando Corto
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 23/24/23
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDeathdots
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    Blade of the wind
    Mercy of the sword
    Fight of your life
    Mercy from the Lord

    Your doom is near
    The end is here
    Whatever may be
    You’ll come to see

    This day you’re alive
    Next day you die
    Live, eat, carry on
    Don’t ever be looked down upon

    One thing can save you
    From your impending doom
    It isn’t material
    That will lead to your tomb

    It is the realization
    You’ll be here no longer
    Knowing your place
    Will help you grow stronger

    Soon…you will leave
    Soon…we’ll all cry
    But leave with a smile
    And know that it’s alright




    Submitted on 2006-12-07 15:29:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good message. the only way is to realize and be ready for death at all times.

    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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