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Author:	maninthemirror
ASL Info:	17/m/arkansas
Elite Ratio:	2.64 - 224/318/109
Words:	92

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Serious
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the meaning to this is very simple. but if you don't understand, just ask me, and I'll explain it to you.

writer's block dots

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something blocking my thoughts/
so I can't use what was taught/
knowledge haunting my mind/
but the words, I can't find/
expression is impossible/
but I"m wisdom's unstoppable/

I smoke so much, trying to bring out my best/
but,I can only write when I'm alone, its a test/

lonliness brings a feeling, a need for atonement/
A need for a purpose, but just for the moment/

what it is for, I"m wishing, god, make me alone/
for a feel I have a reason for which to atone/

Submitted on 2006-12-07 17:18:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey J I see that u finally got a piece on here it is really good BTW (by the way). I also agree with sandman on liking how our thoughts work and all that good stuff. I still have never finished my pieces that I was working on and it really sucks. I just can't write n-e more and I wish that I could.

N-e ways i got off topic and this piece is great. Well after that writers block n-e thing would have been great. JK! U know I am jus playin with you and I love ya right. My fav part was in the first stanza when u say:

knowledge haunting my mind/
but the words, I can't find/
expression is impossible/
but I"m wisdom's unstoppable/

I have no idea why it is my fav part it just is. I guess that it is prolly because ur mind is haunted by the knowledge and even though it is there u can't get it out and I know how that is. Laterzz...

Angel
| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by ForsakenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
  hi i like this i must be going thru the same i probabbly have written 5000 pieces of poetry or better but in the last 6 months it has shut itself off

great view on how are thoughts work and it gives me something to think about

great post
thanx sandman
| Posted on 2006-12-08 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this one
that happenes to me alot
like i have so much going on but i dont know what to say
but this is a really good one
and its different =]

amber</3zakabi
| Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
  lonliness brings a feeling, a need for atonement/
A need for a purpose, but just for the moment/

that is my fave part all of it is filled with emotion and i go through this everyday and i can only write when it is dark and no one else is around to interrupt me.

~marie
| Posted on 2006-12-31 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]

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