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    dots Submission Name: Terra Incognitadots
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    Author: Scribner
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 131/134/18
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1080
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 636



    Description:
       Just another sappy poem.


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    dotsTerra Incognitadots
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    You are an unknown land.
    An undiscovered country,
    That I wish to explore.

    I yearn to walk with you in you valleys.
    To hold your hand at your mountain peaks.
    To run with you through your perfumed prairies.

    I long to be there when your rivers overflow.
    To be your clear waters
    Through your seasons of drought.

    I want to walk your sandy beaches.
    Watch the sun rise above the horizon
    And swim your salty seas.

    You are my terra incognita.
    And like a faithful pilgrim
    I will travel ever onward toward your lands.




    Submitted on 2004-01-29 16:03:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mmmmmmmm, nice. "5". That's all the comment I think it needs.
    | Posted on 2004-01-29 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]


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