You write very well, and have a developing talent that is going to produce even better material! Being a teen is tough! Mother Nature gives you all the hormones and chemicals that you will need as an adult when you're a Teen, and a time lag for you to gather the experience to manage them well! Sometimes all you can do is "hang on" for awhile!
This was a well put together piece and i liked it. It seem like every line had an emotion in it. And i think its a time in every teen life were they feel so stressed and they just dont know what to do or who to turn to .I hope your not feeling like that and if you do just try to find someone to talk to before it's to late. this felt original to me it seemed like it came straight from the heart.