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    dots Submission Name: I Got No Friends I'm Lonelydots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I can't even think now!!!


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    dotsI Got No Friends I'm Lonelydots
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    My Daily dosage is ferocious,
    I smoke dope,
    Just the strongest opium,
    Hoping I'm close to just breaking,
    Frustration,
    Close to a pure smell,
    Something close to Magnolia.

    Though I'm broken hearten,
    Women have left me hopeless in darkness;
    I'm soul-searching soul-hurtin',
    What happens when money,
    Don't make you happy,
    I wish this on no person.

    I made all my final statements,
    Seen all sorts of places,
    I have no friends I'm lonely,
    I want no pity,
    To save me.



































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      has thou spoken to a "Godly" person lately? there's a way to get saved without pity!
    i like this poem cuz you speak the truth and bring in soo much reality that other "dope" smokers such as you and i can relate to. i understand completely how you feel bro. all i can say is: "find a way to get through the day, forget thy problems and never run away"
    -THieF
    | Posted on 2006-12-08 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]


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