I was in art class, and decided to write FINALLY! If anyone has any ideas on how to make it work better, then go for it.
Raven
Dream Life, Dream House -------------------------------------------
I sit in the chair, by the covered window
I sit and wait
I look through the cracked wood and down the lane
I look and wait
I listen for the screeching tires over the loose gravel
I listen and wait
These things will never come to be
I know that in my heart and soul
As I walk around our once Dream home
I start to ponder, as I do every day
Of things that were and things that are
What ever did happen to us?
Where did I go wrong?
Wow honey this is beautifully done. The flow is wonderful and it is just amazingly done. I always said you were an amazing poets and I wish I coudl write like you.
Work better? This was just right! I like what you get from one photo. You have feeling deep inside you and you have let them out just so we may share whats in your mind. Great write! Keep it up! Kelley Frost
Submission Name: Dream Life, Dream House
