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    dots Submission Name: Whenever You Want Medots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 860
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1752



    Description:
       A vow of love to a person I've yet to discover. Written while listening to "1000 Words" by Jade from Sweetbox.


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    dotsWhenever You Want Medots
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    I know there's been hard times,
    facing darkness in the light of day.
    I know just how you feel;
    but feelings aren't the center here...
    Help me hide my tears.

    [Whenever you want me...]

    I tried to be more for you,
    Tried to be there when you called for me.
    But I'm not what you need.
    I'll fight the darkness by your side...
    but not in your mind.

    I'll come to you, I'll hide with you (I'll make you fight),
    But I know I can't chase your fears away
    the way I am; the way you've made me to be...

    Whenever you want me...
    [Kyuusoku...nogasu...Kyuusoku...nogasu...*]

    ::chorus 1::
    You know I'm here, you know I'll be there
    You see through me, you know that I'm sorry
    But I can't be there whenever you want me.

    There's more to you than you know I know.
    There's more to you than I know you care to show.
    You're hiding something special inside your soul...
    Did you know it was there?

    [Watashi wa haibu no watashi o...sasu baai aisuru.**]

    ::chorus 2::
    I like you now, I might fall in love
    But we're against the odds; a star-crossed hope
    When I know it's wrong, whenever you want me...

    Whenever you want me...

    I know you don't love me...


    *EDIT: The first line of Japanese says 'Hurry back, I miss you,' repeated twice. The second line says 'I'll still love you when you stab me in the back.' Sorry. I shouldn't noted that earlier.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I would like to say that this piece, and even the comment that you put up there on top, is like me. I was intrigued by the japanese (are you Japanese?) and thrown by the fact that your song seems so... professional. It has a nice flow, but sometimes it also seems a bit confused. Or maybe I'm confused? I dunno
    | Posted on 2004-07-18 00:00:00 | by Raven E. | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very unusual and strong lyrics. I don't think it would fit any genre of music I listen to, but it certainly has merit.
    | Posted on 2004-06-02 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it evenbetter now that i know what the rest says...lol...if you ever get it recorded pass it along so us elite people can hear it...
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a really great piece..i like everything about it it is fabulous....yeah the japanese did throw me off what does it mean?....lol...umm yea what does it mean?...welcome to elite
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      i have to say i really like this song.it had alot of meaning in it and i think if it ever got recorded it would sound awesome.
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by lonely poet | [ Reply to This ]
      This would make a really cool song. Something I think everyone would understand a appreciate... I sure did! The japanese may throw some people for a loop... but it's all good!
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      i think that it is a great sone my favoite part was
    There's more to you than you know I know.
    There's more to you than I know you care to show.
    You're hiding something special inside your soul...
    Did you know it was there?
    keep it up it is good lili
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      nice interesting lyrics...could be taken as a love song or a I'm gonna love you song..depending where the listener is in life. Very strong lyrics.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]



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