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    dots Submission Name: Cheatdots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Hate
    fears fate
    escape from the begining
    and lingering ends
    send me a letter
    from the edge of your thoughts
    wrap it in red
    heat sends
    such a sinful color
    fire like embers
    in the eye of the wanted
    running from destiny
    into the arms of lust
    you sold your soul
    for the price of one
    what a life to pay
    for the world above.




    Submitted on 2006-12-09 05:08:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. succint but somehow I get it. Its cools how you dont really explain much, its more of line per line, so complete flow and still the reader understands whats going on. Always wanted to write something like that.
    cant wait to read more
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by blankscreen | [ Reply to This ]


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