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    dots Submission Name: Peacedots
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    Author: Anz
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 12/23/22
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPeacedots
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    Peace, a word we hear but never see.
    War doesn't seem to solve a thing.
    Faith, hope, friendship, joy,
    something hard to visualize.
    Hatred and fear just seem to appear,
    we need to get outta here.
    I need you, together we'll make it through.
    War and fear, no longer will you settle here!




    Submitted on 2006-12-09 05:53:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love the first line. it makes you think about our future and stuff.
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]
      really nice poem. makes you think~hopefully we will see it one day~not likely but its good to hope~nice job keep up the good work. :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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