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    dots Submission Name: You and Medots

    Author: Anz
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 12/23/22
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsYou and Medots

    I'm waiting for my destiny,
    my fate to fall in place.
    I can't stop thinking of the life we
    can have together when I see your face.
    When life doesn't seem worth living,
    and tears are running down my cheek,
    it's your smile, your laughter,
    that makes things better
    You and Me<3

    Submitted on 2006-12-09 06:06:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that's so sweet. i usually would write alot more than that. but still there's a really good feel to this.
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww I love it. Its so sweet and short and perfect. I would write more and I often do, but theres not much else to say. Its enjoyable to read and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ]

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