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    dots Submission Name: The Horsesdots
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    Author: VampireMaiden
    ASL Info:    15, Female, Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 23/31/29
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 132
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 483



    Description:
       This is just a poem about horses. I used to realy love them. But they are still beautiful.


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    dotsThe Horsesdots
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    Wishing to ride them.
    Wanting to run.
    Seeing their blowing manes at there great power.
    The sound they make,
    Clip-Clop-Clip-Clop.
    The sweet sound of their hooves,
    beating against the ground of the open plains.
    Wanting willingly,
    so anxious.
    I want to gallop,
    canter,
    and even trot with them.
    I want to gallop,
    canter,
    and even trot...
    with the Horses.




    Submitted on 2006-12-09 15:27:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      really nice poem about horses~takes me back to a time in childhood when I felt the same~
    "The sweet sound of their hooves,
    beating against the ground of the open plains"
    love that part_great imagery Nice job :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]



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