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Let him in

Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 40 /45 /29
Words: 83
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Let him in

Shave my legs and paint my nails
Subliminally hoping that the night will hold more than it will
Straighten my hair and curl the ends
Blue shadow will be perfect
Gloss over my lips and blush my cheeks
Find the perfect dress
Open toed heels look lovely
Obvious to anyone that I carefully planned this look
Walk to the living room and turn on the movie
Curl up on the couch with my blanket
Nobody ever knocks, because nobody was invited

Submitted on 2006-12-09 14:28:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Awww I love it. Just enjoying yourself alone. I dont know whether its supposed to make me feel sad because no one is coming or happy because your content being alone. Well it seems like your content. But either way, I like it. Sweet and still, I wish I could have the time and devoted to do just this. Feel pretty even though no one is there to tell me so.

| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ]

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