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    dots Submission Name: We make each other perfectdots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 778
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    Description:
       Me and my boyfriend arn't considered a perfect couple because of are past. But me and him have gotten better since we've been together.


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    Were not the perfect couple,
    thats for sure.
    But were perfect for each other,
    You know it's true.

    For each of our individual flaws,
    we make each others up.
    You fix mine,
    I'll fix yours.
    Any open wound I had on my heart,
    You stiched it up and helped it heal.
    Any addiction your soul had still,
    I gave you a good reason to quit.

    You helped me get back to normal,
    Back to where I could trust again without being afraid.
    I helped you find the light,
    The light to where you could see, that not everything evolved around achohol.

    You help me get through my hard days,
    when I feel I just want to give up.
    You hold me till everything's ok again.
    I help you up when you fall down,
    I left you with all my might,
    I won't stop till your back on your feet again.

    We agrue about stupid things,
    Things that wouldn't lead to agruements,
    if it wasn't for my hardhead, and your stubbornness.
    But after it's all said and done,
    I'll admit I was wrong,
    While you say your sorry.

    With you I'm not scared of this world,
    I can hold my head up,
    and know you'll keep me from harms way.
    With me you can be who you want to be.
    You know I won't judge or penilze you for the way you are.

    You make me beautiful, pretty and smart.
    I make you handsome, wise, successful.

    I love you and
    You love me.

    Though were not the perfect couple,
    In whole we make each other perfect




    Submitted on 2006-12-09 15:02:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow thats really nice... its so true ho everyone wants to be the perfect couple... wen actually i dont think there is such a thing at all... neway... i was great to read ur poem... i enjoyed it...

    cheers
    karen
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow I like it like theres alot of thought or truth to it kind of touching its ok,
    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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