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Is that all you can say

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 181
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Is that all you can say

"Im sorry you feel that way."
Is that all you can say
How about asking me why I feel this way.

Maybe if we communicated a little more
There will be more chances that I wouldnt walk out the door.

Im not saying that Im leaving
Im just trying to prove a point
Trying to tell you that
Im sick of being ignored.

If you love me like you say you do
You'll try to make it better
Instead of feeling sorry for me all of the time.

I know Im way younger
And its hard for me to understand some things
But thats why you should take the time out to explain
My feelings should matter
Because yours do to me
Why dont you associate with me
Instead of feeling sorry for me

I know I just repeated this line
But Im telling you what is on my mind
So I ask once again
Do you really love me?

"Im sorry that you feel that way."
Is that all you can say?

Submitted on 2006-12-09 17:27:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I know how you feel... I really do. Nice writing.
| Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
  Holy cow. Nice one, I could feel what you felt there even though it probably wasn't to the extent of what you felt but I've never experianced anything close to that.
| Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ]

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