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    dots Submission Name: Too youngdots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1583



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       No I'm not pregnate but I did have a scare once, Thats when I wrote this


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    dotsToo youngdots
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    Thoughts are racing,
    As I see the results.
    How could this happen to me?
    Never did I think it would be me with this problem.
    I was always so damn lucky.
    I guess my luck just ran out.

    What will my boyfriend say?
    I hope he won’t blame me.
    It’s his fault too.
    I know he knows that’s true.
    We were in so much love,
    Caught up in the moment,
    We didn’t think to use protection.
    After all I’m on the pill.
    It said it protects 98%,
    Guess I’m in the minority.
    I just don’t know what to do.

    I’m so scared to tell my parents.
    They’ll surly hate me for this.
    How can confront them?
    What do I say, “Hey mom and dad, guess what I’m pregnant.”
    No, but I gotta tell them.
    It’s their right to know.
    They always said they’d love me no matter what.
    But on this one, They’ll think twice about that.

    What do I do?
    Do I abort?
    Do I give up the life that’s inside?
    Do I have the child?
    If so, how will I support it?
    Will the father take his place?
    Or will he dissert his own blood?
    Will he love me too?
    Or just say I’m his baby’s mama?

    I’ve got to answer these questions on my own.
    For I could’ve said no,
    But I didn’t.
    So now I’m faced with this unfortunate predicament,

    The only thing I do know is,
    Both me and him are too young to be parents.
    But now we both have to grow up.




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      Hey thats an good way to write if u are congrats,
    My kid changed the world for me, kind of like who Iam today my little girl, keep up the good work,
    ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write! You better be careful! Next time you might not be so lucky? Loved this peace!!!!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I hear ya on this, except it was more than a scare cause i was pregant. that was almost 6 years ago and i wouldn't change have my son for the world. his birthday is in 4 days and i just can't believe he's gotten so big, anyhoo i was getting distracted, i was pregant at 19 and had him when i was 20 so it wasn't that bad cause i wasn't 17 and under. anyway, the experience seemed to open your eyes and gave you insight into yourself. fantastic write
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. powerful and strong. you really put your feelings out there in a beautiful way. good job
    x0
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]


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