Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Sentencesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 822
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 447



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSentencesdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I've often wished that sentences could spend like money,
    and well-wrought ones were worth more,
    then we could be rich,
    and poets would rule the world
    in their illogical, hedonistic way,
    then the laws would be even crazier.
    Perhaps people would be more cheerful,
    for children would surely prosper
    because they are masters of language
    before logic and knowledge destroy this trait.




    Submitted on 2004-05-31 22:50:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      That sounds like such a writers fantasy, that would be so cool, but unfortunately its only a well written poem expressing a dream. Either way, this piece is most satisying.
    | Posted on 2004-06-15 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      i get what you're saying!! but noooooo!!!!

    i don't have enough money in the world... i just couldn't afford to pay for all the sentences that i'd like to hear...
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great idea. I SO wish it were true! Mastermind I tell ya... that's what it is. It's truly pathetic how some kinds speak, y'know? They need a little incentive.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome... i love the ideas of children being the masters of language b4 they are corrupted by sense and logic which really doesnt make sense at all... if you know what i mean. anyways... yes... i think this a gorgeous idea!
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Say something, please. I know it's very bad. I just can't write well today, sorry. This comment is too short.
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      I was considering this as a favourite until you said it was really bad. Now I'm thinking, maybe I'm missing the bad bit or maybe I've got no literary taste. Sure it lacks depth, but spelling things out for the not-so-bright isn't a mortal sin, is it? I think the idea is great, and if more thinkers were involved in politics, then maybe politics wouldn't be so...political. You now, power based, destructive and self serving.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, maube it's not as bad as I thought. I'm just sort of down. I had a bad day/night, so I was in the mood to hate everything.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      wouldn't it be an interesting world if we poets could rule it?! i'm sure we'd do a much better job than the morons who rule it now... and i love your reference to children, because they always speak the truth. they haven't been jaded yet. although as i work with 4-5 year olds, it's depressing sometimes because they seem to be getting jaded earlier and earlier in life. cuddledumplin for president!!! i'd vote yea!!!!!
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    12821

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Legends written by poetotoe
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The First Time written by Wolfwatching
    Love and Solitaire written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Incubus written by monad
    Sunt Mala Quae Libas written by MyPeriodical
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    ME written by jjd
    By the bar written by expiring_touch
    Tides of Man written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Born of the Mouth written by MyPeriodical
    Dirge of Nostalgia written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    This written by Chelebel
    Convergence written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bam written by Daniel Barlow
    Skulls Beyond the Palisade written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Last to Walk the Earth written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Genesis written by saartha
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Stretto written by saartha
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry