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    dots Submission Name: Sentencesdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 799
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    I've often wished that sentences could spend like money,
    and well-wrought ones were worth more,
    then we could be rich,
    and poets would rule the world
    in their illogical, hedonistic way,
    then the laws would be even crazier.
    Perhaps people would be more cheerful,
    for children would surely prosper
    because they are masters of language
    before logic and knowledge destroy this trait.

    Submitted on 2004-05-31 22:50:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That sounds like such a writers fantasy, that would be so cool, but unfortunately its only a well written poem expressing a dream. Either way, this piece is most satisying.
    | Posted on 2004-06-15 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      i get what you're saying!! but noooooo!!!!

    i don't have enough money in the world... i just couldn't afford to pay for all the sentences that i'd like to hear...
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great idea. I SO wish it were true! Mastermind I tell ya... that's what it is. It's truly pathetic how some kinds speak, y'know? They need a little incentive.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome... i love the ideas of children being the masters of language b4 they are corrupted by sense and logic which really doesnt make sense at all... if you know what i mean. anyways... yes... i think this a gorgeous idea!
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Say something, please. I know it's very bad. I just can't write well today, sorry. This comment is too short.
    | Posted on 2004-05-31 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      I was considering this as a favourite until you said it was really bad. Now I'm thinking, maybe I'm missing the bad bit or maybe I've got no literary taste. Sure it lacks depth, but spelling things out for the not-so-bright isn't a mortal sin, is it? I think the idea is great, and if more thinkers were involved in politics, then maybe politics wouldn't be so...political. You now, power based, destructive and self serving.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, maube it's not as bad as I thought. I'm just sort of down. I had a bad day/night, so I was in the mood to hate everything.
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      wouldn't it be an interesting world if we poets could rule it?! i'm sure we'd do a much better job than the morons who rule it now... and i love your reference to children, because they always speak the truth. they haven't been jaded yet. although as i work with 4-5 year olds, it's depressing sometimes because they seem to be getting jaded earlier and earlier in life. cuddledumplin for president!!! i'd vote yea!!!!!
    | Posted on 2004-06-01 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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