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Heaven’s Brightest Star by Ron Cole

Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Thank you so much for this Ron. You really are a living saint. thank you.

Heaven’s Brightest Star by Ron Cole

Heaven’s Brightest Star

If you look to the
later on

You'll see
a Star
and awfully

It's the Heavenly
of a recent
Move In

She's one of their
and our
next of

The Heavens
will be better
cause She now

and She'll shine
ever brightly
as Love's

Ron Cole

To Lou
In Memory of
Her Grandma Angela

Submitted on 2006-12-10 17:52:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ron Cole is my Uncle by traditional standards but is really more my "Dad" So to read this poem and knowing him -they are one and the same. His poetry is this case reflects the type of caring person he truly is!
Karen Ramos
| Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by texas33 | [ Reply to This ]
  Maybe those angels talk to each other in poetry like you & R. Cole do.
| Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  I understand your loss, Lou--My grandfather passed away from cancer years ago. It's a hard experience to lose those you care for, no matter who you're dealing with...Read your journal as well. I remember once hearing someone say, "It never stops hurting, and it never really fades--it just returns less often." He could have been talking about grief, or he could have been talking about chronic indigestion. Up to you.

Tell Ron "good write."

--crimson echo
| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
  :] i love it. ron cole is my boy ! so adorable and sweet and all that good sheeitt.

| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
  this was extremely sweet and kind, makes me miss all the people i've lost through time, but not in a sad way.
| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, aint he just the nicest guy?
heart of pure gold! his poetry always leaves me in awe, and a lot of the time, speechless. i'll bet you were overjoyed with this! god bless ya. i'll bet ya grandma likes it too!
warm wishes to you and all your family today, sweetheart.
| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]

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