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    dots Submission Name: Heavenís Brightest Star by Ron Coledots

    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1069
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Thank you so much for this Ron. You really are a living saint. thank you.

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    dotsHeavenís Brightest Star by Ron Coledots

    Heavenís Brightest Star

    If you look to the
    later on

    You'll see
    a Star
    and awfully

    It's the Heavenly
    of a recent
    Move In

    She's one of their
    and our
    next of

    The Heavens
    will be better
    cause She now

    and She'll shine
    ever brightly
    as Love's

    Ron Cole

    To Lou
    In Memory of
    Her Grandma Angela

    Submitted on 2006-12-10 17:52:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ron Cole is my Uncle by traditional standards but is really more my "Dad" So to read this poem and knowing him -they are one and the same. His poetry is this case reflects the type of caring person he truly is!
    Karen Ramos
    | Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by texas33 | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe those angels talk to each other in poetry like you & R. Cole do.
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand your loss, Lou--My grandfather passed away from cancer years ago. It's a hard experience to lose those you care for, no matter who you're dealing with...Read your journal as well. I remember once hearing someone say, "It never stops hurting, and it never really fades--it just returns less often." He could have been talking about grief, or he could have been talking about chronic indigestion. Up to you.

    Tell Ron "good write."

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      :] i love it. ron cole is my boy ! so adorable and sweet and all that good sheeitt.

    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was extremely sweet and kind, makes me miss all the people i've lost through time, but not in a sad way.
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, aint he just the nicest guy?
    heart of pure gold! his poetry always leaves me in awe, and a lot of the time, speechless. i'll bet you were overjoyed with this! god bless ya. i'll bet ya grandma likes it too!
    warm wishes to you and all your family today, sweetheart.
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]

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