Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Heavenís Brightest Star by Ron Coledots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 679
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 678



    Description:
       Thank you so much for this Ron. You really are a living saint. thank you.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHeavenís Brightest Star by Ron Coledots
    -------------------------------------------


    Heavenís Brightest Star

    If you look to the
    Heavens
    later on
    tonight

    You'll see
    a Star
    lovely
    and awfully
    bright

    It's the Heavenly
    home
    of a recent
    Move In

    She's one of their
    Angels
    and our
    next of
    kin

    The Heavens
    will be better
    cause She now
    lives
    there

    and She'll shine
    ever brightly
    as Love's
    eternal
    flare.


    Ron Cole

    To Lou
    In Memory of
    Her Grandma Angela




    Submitted on 2006-12-10 17:52:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Ron Cole is my Uncle by traditional standards but is really more my "Dad" So to read this poem and knowing him -they are one and the same. His poetry is this case reflects the type of caring person he truly is!
    Karen Ramos
    | Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by texas33 | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe those angels talk to each other in poetry like you & R. Cole do.
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand your loss, Lou--My grandfather passed away from cancer years ago. It's a hard experience to lose those you care for, no matter who you're dealing with...Read your journal as well. I remember once hearing someone say, "It never stops hurting, and it never really fades--it just returns less often." He could have been talking about grief, or he could have been talking about chronic indigestion. Up to you.

    Tell Ron "good write."

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      :] i love it. ron cole is my boy ! so adorable and sweet and all that good sheeitt.

    x0
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was extremely sweet and kind, makes me miss all the people i've lost through time, but not in a sad way.
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, aint he just the nicest guy?
    heart of pure gold! his poetry always leaves me in awe, and a lot of the time, speechless. i'll bet you were overjoyed with this! god bless ya. i'll bet ya grandma likes it too!
    warm wishes to you and all your family today, sweetheart.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    128230

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    FamiliarDemons ¬©‚ĄĘ written by kyserin
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Outlaw
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry