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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    26/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756/734/161
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsyour owndots
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    bind me up
    tie me down
    your wish is my command
    tear my flesh
    and lash my sex
    discipline is in your hands
    talk me down
    and leash me up
    parade me through town
    lay me down
    and fuck me hard
    because I am your own




    Submitted on 2006-12-10 19:14:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      OMG! this is so delicious~great interpretation of the sex and lust involved in bondage~yum yum
    Great job excellent piece
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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