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    dots Submission Name: Wizardsdots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 163
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 501



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    dotsWizardsdots
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    Construct me a hateful heart
    To shelter my instincts
    Equip me with lazer eyes
    To expose and dispose
    All the pretty ones
    That swallow mad ape pills
    To cure all reason
    Be-wing me
    As so to levitate
    Above and beyond
    Swating cordial bye byes
    Explode me
    Pink angel guts will clothe
    The world
    Like a flesh tuxedo
    Everybody will dance sporting
    Fresh fly Justin threads
    And fresh it will be




    Submitted on 2006-12-10 23:04:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i think you are writing to rip on society, but that may not be your intention at all. if it is not what you intended, then i offer sincere apologies that i missed the point. is this just random? or is this how you get your kicks? letting us sift through to find a nonexistant deeper meaning and driving ourselves to insanity in the process? see? it worked. i havent a coherent thought in my head. congratulations.
    "and fresh it will be". kickass line there. its very final, very firm. kinda leading off to something more, but kinda ending it right there, you know? anyway, very interesting. made me think.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]



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