Every different day I face. Which will be my place? That I will land and in my hand I hold the knowledge on how not to get old, and forget what you were told. How not to be bold. Now grab a hold n I’ll unload. How to build a new mold. That forms my rearranged brain. Far from being plain. And very hard to obtain. First you must re frame. Your world game, and while you there why not a new name. So you can fully obtain a glide of a Crain, or water falling off a lion’s mane why doesn't it leave a stain? It’s all the simple things in our lives. Like why do we love our wives? Even though they strive. To always drive. Your new ride, and she lies and fake cries.
| Your searching for a way to express your love and also you have given place to an adventourous trip from beyond. Keep up the pen man ship.||| Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by timelesspilot20 | [ Reply to This ] || love the lion idea, the stain.... so many good things to say about it but none of them explain what you captured.... love the wives idea too.... really well done- you have a special tone. x x x||| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by Charlie Poppins | [ Reply to This ] || i loved this little shindig you did here. lol. it had very good wording and points.......it's definently different that anything else on here and i like that. |
|| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ] || Wow a rap..thats cool...I like it. Not much I can say on it though, never really critiqued a rap. But it seems like it has alot of good points and makes sense. I like it.|
|| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ] || it think it was cool its a true fact in life||| Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by washwnd | [ Reply to This ] |