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    dots Submission Name: "Redeem her"dots
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    Author: Romeo
    ASL Info:    20/m/Hamilton Ontario, Ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.85 - 18/9/9
    Words: 351
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 917
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1984



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       This Is "A Comment" For some one.. So all comments for this one is welcome but keep in mind that this is just that a comment on its own...


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    dots"Redeem her"dots
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    What can i say? What could i possible do?
    Why didnt he stay? These questions cus he`s their with you.

    Id hold you so tight, You`ll be warm in my wing.
    Theres no need to fright, Just follow the words as i sing.

    Youll be safe here,
    No need to hide.
    I`ll make things clear,
    All because you assume he lied.
    Your frightend i know,
    I`ll protect you i swear,
    This isn`t a show,
    This Anguish is no longer just yours to bare.

    You say i dont know that God is past due? Then maybe its you who dosent see?
    He lies awake to wait for you. He tosses and turns, he tells this to me.
    He says "Dear Steve, where did she go?", i try to tell him that your still their.
    "Is she safe? I truely hope so", "Id be lost without her, we were a pair"
    I attempt to reasure him that you are well, he fell to his knees and weept at my feet.
    I told him that your eyes have seen hell, then he said "I wanted her to be joyful, not feel this deceit"
    "I held her hand and seen her smile", "This is my fault, I did this, what did I do?"
    You could`ve held her longer and stayed awhile, but instead you left, she didnt have a clue.
    Lord please fix this, correct your mistake, Take her into your bossom, thats where she belongs.
    Keep your promise, one that you can not break, Fix these problems, correct your wrongs.
    So for now ill spread my wings and keep her embraced, ive done my part know its your turn.
    If you care so much, lets go make haste, dont make her wait, dont let her burn.

    ( Im nothing but a stranger to you, But im still here to help you through.
    I hope my words did not offend, my intension was only to be a friend.
    So this is the comment you wished to hear, i hope you enjoyed it, goodnight my dear)

    -Romeo




    Submitted on 2006-12-11 06:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thanx for this...i have felt really lost lately without him...i really do feel abandoned without him...but this kinda gives me some hope...not sure why but maybe you are supposed to be my angel...my messenger from god...thanx again...and im glad you enjoyed my poem...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by redeemer | [ Reply to This ]


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