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    dots Submission Name: a letter for my deardots
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    Author: lauren hamill
    ASL Info:    24/f/can't say really.
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 52/30/14
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 872
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1095



    Description:
       a sappy love letter to someone i think is great


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    dotsa letter for my deardots
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    I know your sadness dear.
    I see pain in your eyes, dear.
    I now the things you think and why, dear.
    Your strength is not the height in your donfidence,
    but the softness in your flaws, dear.
    The imperfections in your reflection
    don't mean you're not enough, dear.
    I feel you are fragile in my arms,
    and I promise I'll be careful with your heart.
    For I've been hurt many times before, dear,
    yet, I'm not scared of you at all.
    I want you to know if this doesn't work out
    it's not for a lack of what you are dear,
    but for a lack of what I am not.
    Please stand straight,
    be proud of who you've become, dear.
    When I looked at you for that long,
    I claimed I was trying to figure you out.
    But, dear, I know more about you than you'd ever want.
    You are such a pretty boy, dear,
    because, so much of your beauty lies inside.
    We're not for everyone, but
    dear, promise m eyou'll always love yourself.




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