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    dots Submission Name: Brothersdots
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    Author: usglen
    ASL Info:    60-Male-Garden Grove,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 59/71/44
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 702
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    Description:
       An acrostic poem that I wrote on my Birthday when I became 60 years old. I hope that all of my readers will enjoy reading this.


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    dotsBrothersdots
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    Brothers I have three
    Return my phone calls and e-mail
    Otherwise I’m still their older brother
    Today they’ll all call
    Helpful as always
    Everybody will be together this Christmas
    Repeatedly they do things
    Still we communicate with each other





    Submitted on 2006-12-11 15:11:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am an only child, but I can try to understand if that's what it takes to truly relate to this poem.

    Short and sweet, I like it.

    -Zach
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by Khargath | [ Reply to This ]


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