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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots
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    Author: redeemer
    ASL Info:    19/female/venus
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 85/91/57
    Words: 327
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 78
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       This is about feeling lost without something to hold on to...for me it's god...but for you...it maybe something different...Take it how you would like...the point is to read between the lines and realize that when you are lost someone will find you...kisses...


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    dotsLostdots
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    I feel so lost
    In the bleakness of my mind
    I feel so empty
    With this pit in my soul
    Somebody save this lost little girl
    Hold her in your arms
    And give her the world

    Look deep inside
    And see what you can find
    Watch for her to blink
    Because her true feelings the will hide
    Wipe away the pieces
    From her shattered life
    Fill her with hope
    And just hold on tight

    Watch the promises you make
    Because she will hold you to
    Watch what you feel for her
    Because they might not fall through
    She is a facade
    A decolate being
    She has no use for love
    She is not one for feeling

    She gave her heart
    To the one she loved
    But he abandoned her
    And went above
    He walked out of her life
    Right passed what she need
    She hates him so
    But she is conceided

    She thinks she is not wrong
    That he's the one who's mistaken
    She thinks that she's won
    But it's her life he's taken
    Watch the sands of time
    Slip through her hands
    And at the end of days
    Watch the story unwind

    Of how true love
    Of the truest kind
    Was lost forever
    The day he died...

    At the end of days
    They stand and face
    This sight will be something
    You just can't erase
    Watch as he holds her
    And they begin to pray
    Because god is her's
    And he will forever stay

    Humanity as is known
    Is not what it seems
    You must look for
    What has not been shown
    Watch how life is just a dream
    And how the delicate fabric
    Can just rip at the seams

    This smoke and mirrors illusion
    Is running out fast
    Don't waste your time
    Dwelling on the past
    I know your lost
    But he will find you
    When you open your heart
    And his door you walk through...




    Submitted on 2006-12-11 20:13:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      so you lost god? just woke up one morning and knew there was nothing there? maybe something terible happened? something unfair? no justification? well whatever the case i see that you're still looking for him by this, thats good. you probably arent one to waste things either. well i geuss if you have nothing to hope for then theres still the hope of finding hope somewhere later. things will work out but i found it happens faster if you keep smiling, good luck mate.
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Saphire Twiligh | [ Reply to This ]



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