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    dots Submission Name: Without A Reason To Look Through Youdots
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    Author: Amberdy
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 241/232/59
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 141
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       I miss him...


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    dotsWithout A Reason To Look Through Youdots
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    You're face could have been
    long forgotten by now,
    but I would never allow it.
    I could never bring myself
    to let the picture go.
    Your eyes are a stuck image
    inside this mind that lives
    on thoughts of you.
    I could have given you away,
    but what would I gain?
    Life without you is war without pain.
    (It could not exsist.)
    Life would not contain its shape;
    ...We hold it together.
    You fear that I would betray you,
    though my words
    have only spoken otherwise.
    You fear that I'd find fullfillment
    in someone else's eyes.
    Have you not seen the happiness
    you create in me?
    I have not a reason
    to look through you.
    You are all I care to need
    and all I need to care for.
    As promising and unfailing
    as water on the shore
    and you keep me coming back
    for more.
    You feed my addiction
    with fragile words
    of a promised future,
    and we dream up our fairytales
    detail by detail.
    Ill wait for you,
    that's all I can do
    because the truth of the matter is,
    there's no me without you.
    We can make it,
    just don't let me go....
    I can do this but not alone.




    Submitted on 2006-12-12 15:42:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      alone and sad. wistful and empty. unsure and forgetful of what makes us complete. and always searching for that spark.

    i know this because i'm forever searching. and i've learnt... that one has to let go and wish for stars to shine again, to make these wishes real and vocal: shout out to the nearest stranger your deepest desires and shrug your shoulders when they look at you as if you're deranged; but secretly, know that they'll be envious of what you have: surety in finding hope somewhere, in any shape or form. it doesn't matter, yet it does: a paradoxical, reciprocal thing of cause and effect, karma, etc.

    what the hell am i rambling on about?
    i never know.
    just my thoughts.
    yup.
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]
      O wow...I think you just took the words right out of my life. Missing someone..needing somone...knowing they're the one...not being able to let...not being WILLING to let go...is...incredibly hard. I love the first lines...how you could forget him...if you tried..but you'd never allow it. He means too much. And life without you is war without pain...it doesn't exist. That was beautiful...and for anyone that has been truly in love with the one they were meant for..it makes so much sense and is all too true. Being willing to wait for someone is a beautiful thing all in itself..but you're right...you can't do it alone. It's gotta be two people fighting for the same love..the same dream. Great great write. I loved it. It's a favorite for me. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
      you can always go on alone. it might not feel it but you can, if the day comes that you need to.
    about the piece, i would get rid of the parenthesis, and go back to this piece when i wasnt so emotional to do the first rewrite by myself.
    just what i would do.

    you might miss them. i miss my guy, every day, and i see him every day, so i know the massive hole that love creates in you.

    good luck
    evelyn.
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by eowyn | [ Reply to This ]



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