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    dots Submission Name: thoughtsdots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 164
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 675



    Description:
       this is a poem that I was writeing for some one. leave comments if you want. but there is one person that needs to read this.


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    I sit around thinking,
    Of some one I have never met,
    Looking out from the window,
    Wondering of your thinking of me too.

    I want to see your face,
    And to hear your voice,
    To touch your skin,
    And feel your warmth in a lovers embrace.

    I blush at my thoughts,
    And my heart tells me the truth,
    But I’m to scared to say my feelings,
    Worried about your response.

    I hope that you were here for me,
    And me here for you,
    I don’t like being alone,
    But I always smile when I think of you.

    So I ask you tonight,
    Would you please be mine?




    Submitted on 2006-12-12 18:51:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this was simply beautiful. It's a touching tale of a heart longing for that one person who can make it glow. Your lucky gent won't be able to say no. ^_~
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Renada | [ Reply to This ]
      A very old and eternal lover's lament ... does he/she or dosen't he/she ... you have done a fine job here with the poem you have not overstated anything (which is too often the case) you have struck just the correct note ... lovely .... I really enjoyed this ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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