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    dots Submission Name: Kiss me...dots
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    Author: Black-Death
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    dotsKiss me...dots
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    i can hear the tremble in your voice... i can hear your thoughts ""kiss me"" in your head.... i put my hand on your face and brought it close... and as are lips tuched are hearts beat the same.. and the tears faded awway...




    Submitted on 2006-12-12 22:57:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice. Chills my spine.
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by SouthernState | [ Reply to This ]


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