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    dots Submission Name: I've Got Faithdots
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    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 317
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 999



    Description:
       I'm not sure whether to classify this as lyrics or just a poem. Anyways, it's pretty self-explanatory; I wouldn't want to taint your interpretation anyways.

    Tell me what you think it's about, and give those technical comments I love so much.


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    dotsI've Got Faithdots
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    I’ve been told to believe,
    And I’ll see.
    I believe, I’ve got faith
    In immortal things
    To which no shape is giv’n.
    Things I can’t touch,
    Not even a breeze.

    Standing on the side
    Watching you enjoy and destroy
    That which I hold dear.
    I’ve got faith in love
    Without proof.

    I’ve got faith
    In the prison cells.
    In the place where they all
    Send their hearts.
    Tie me down, lock me up
    With the secrets I share.

    Standing on the side
    Watching you enjoy and destroy
    That which I hold dear.
    I’ve got faith in love
    Without proof.

    I know I’ll see one day,
    But not today.
    I hope I’ll see one day,
    But not today.
    One day, maybe, later,
    I’ll find someone to trust.

    Maybe I’ll find
    Part of me that confides,
    And there find
    A man to share secrets.




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