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    dots Submission Name: I've Got Faithdots

    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       I'm not sure whether to classify this as lyrics or just a poem. Anyways, it's pretty self-explanatory; I wouldn't want to taint your interpretation anyways.

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    dotsI've Got Faithdots

    Iíve been told to believe,
    And Iíll see.
    I believe, Iíve got faith
    In immortal things
    To which no shape is givín.
    Things I canít touch,
    Not even a breeze.

    Standing on the side
    Watching you enjoy and destroy
    That which I hold dear.
    Iíve got faith in love
    Without proof.

    Iíve got faith
    In the prison cells.
    In the place where they all
    Send their hearts.
    Tie me down, lock me up
    With the secrets I share.

    Standing on the side
    Watching you enjoy and destroy
    That which I hold dear.
    Iíve got faith in love
    Without proof.

    I know Iíll see one day,
    But not today.
    I hope Iíll see one day,
    But not today.
    One day, maybe, later,
    Iíll find someone to trust.

    Maybe Iíll find
    Part of me that confides,
    And there find
    A man to share secrets.

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