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    dots Submission Name: Christmasdots

    Author: oixi
    ASL Info:    50/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 196/243/100
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is a Pleiades poem. Pleiades: This titled form was invented in 1999 by Craig Tigerman, Sol Magazine's Lead Editor. Only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a single seven-line stanza. The first word in each line begins with the same letter as the title.

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    Christ was born to give us a
    Cherished time that we
    Celebrate in a
    Commercial way, forsaking him for a
    Claus named Santa, who
    Children bombard with wish lists to
    Capitalize on the Holiday.

    Submitted on 2006-12-13 14:17:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the form you used, verry interesting, I have never seen it used before. Good choice. I also like the point you make. The Christmas season has been turned into a camercial gemic and the true meaning lost to the majority. Good piece, your writing is storng, keep it up.

    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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