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    dots Submission Name: For Sophiadots
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    Author: muhammed
    ASL Info:    23/male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 89/129/124
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 865
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    dotsFor Sophiadots
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    thy sweet promise was not sweet ,
    it was love, true and complete,
    and I will keep you warm in my heart'
    saved until the day we meet
    and then I will stay under your feet,
    and my arms will protect
    thee from the cold and heat ..

    thee will be the world for me, and I will treat'
    thee with love,only love pure and neat,
    I don't want be rich nor famous or join the elite,
    all I need is thou, all my dreams in that beat
    that beat's in the heart of thee, and no one can repeat,
    love as true,love as soft , love as long as free,
    love as kind as strong ,as the love I will give to thee,

    because I know that every thing I made
    every hope all the thing that I been wade
    every thing I do now....
    are nothing and soon will fade'
    like footprints in the dew'
    I will stop gasping, spinning because I knew
    the only thing will remain from me
    that I love and have been loved by thee




    Submitted on 2006-12-13 15:20:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      MAGNIFICENT!!! i am close to tears i wish some guy would write me a love poem like that...LOL but i really like this one i am going to add it to my favorites if you don't mind.

    ~~becka marie~~
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow I Really Like It
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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