See Me Here by K.M. Hibner

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Author:	K.M. Hibner
ASL Info:	20/f/Pittsburgh
Elite Ratio:	1.38 - 7/9/9
Words:	64

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	674
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	427

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See Me Here dots

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See me here
Lie me there
Pretend to me you really care

Push me forward
Pull me back
Quickly, hurry before I slack

Hold me tight
Let me go
Tomorrow brings another low

A hundred times
Two hundred more
With these words I will lore

Stay the night
Leave right now
The curtain calls, make one last bow

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