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    dots Submission Name: Beat the Sun to the Day (a song)dots
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    Author: LoneWolf
    ASL Info:    16/F/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 136/108/19
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 951
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1598



    Description:
       well, since it's a song, it probably doesn't sound so good without the melody...
    and the repeating chorus probably sounds lame..
    but i like it! i'm working on making the sounds onto piano, but i'm really slow and have to do it one note at a time. then i'll have to come up with the piano accompanyment... O.o
    i hope you enjoy it!


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    dotsBeat the Sun to the Day (a song)dots
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    If only everything is holding us down
    If only everyone is tearing us apart
    Maybe we can break away
    Maybe we can escape today

    Watch for the pretty colors of sunset
    Look for my shadow across the moon
    As I fly into your open arms
    I know we can run away soon

    Wait for me when the sun goes down
    Wait for me when the clouds cross over
    Search the skies and
    See me fall from the stars
    To be with you

    Together we can fly through ashes
    Of intolerance, lies, and deceit
    Out of the maze of this world
    Into a dream of reality
    Where we can sleep forever
    Where we can remain together
    Though its only imaginary

    Reach eternity before the sun wakes again
    Touch the sky
    Vibrant colors of nothingness
    Maybe we can reach tomorrow
    Before the sun wakes again

    Wait for me when the sun goes down
    Wait for me when the clouds cross over
    Search the skies and
    See me fall from the stars
    To be with you

    We can beat the sun to the day
    We can chase misery away
    Though were nothing
    And have nothing
    But ourselves and each other
    Maybe we can still
    Fly away

    Wait for me when the sun goes down
    Wait for me when the clouds cross over
    Search the skies and
    See me fall from the stars
    To be with you

    All of time will be ours
    If we can just beat the sun to the day




    Submitted on 2006-12-13 17:08:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the imagery, especially the part where it says
    "Together we can fly through ashes
    Of intolerance, lies, and deceit"

    It was good, I am songwriter myself, but you might want to go through and mark the verses and chorus for those who are musically challenged. Keep up the good work!

    *~Misty~*
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]


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