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    dots Submission Name: Over the Ledgedots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 788
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       Well this is just a poem I wrote because people kept saying I was a lesbian because of my hair cut but I'm not. Really it's just a poem with a moral.


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    dotsOver the Ledgedots
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    You critize,
    You judge her,
    You try to bring her down.
    You try to turn against her
    This whole freaken town.
    You try to make her cry.
    You try to make her fall.
    She keeps her feelings inside
    Like a tiny little ball.
    She doesn't let it show
    That these words sting so much,
    Burning her to the core
    Her heart feels so sore.
    Everyone agrees with you
    When you call her all those names.
    To completely ruin her life
    Is your sick little game.
    She feels worse & worse
    With each new statement.
    She just wants to fit in.
    She doesn't deserve this payment.
    Your words cut like razors
    Her wrist are wet & bloody.
    She's being sliced to peices
    While her mind turns to putty.
    The principle is solomn
    As he makes this horrible announcement.
    "Students I'm sorry to say
    One of us has left us."
    She jumped from a building
    With one intention in mind.
    To stop all these rumors
    & all these lies.
    Your words kept pushing
    & pushing.
    Well I hope your happy.
    Your pushed her off that ledge.
    She's gone now
    & it's all your fault.
    If you hadn't said all those words
    She'd still be with us.
    Happy & smiling
    I hope her memory burns you inside
    & that you live with this guilt
    That it's because you lied
    She died.




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 09:29:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    WHEN

    I reaad this poem my mouth actually dropped in amazement! THAT was really fuking hardcore! HOLY
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    DICKSHIT!
    I was like
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    THAT was sooo intence you [censored] rock and I love you!
    Isabella? is that your name?
    KICK ASS NAME!
    xxo
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by coldxaura. | [ Reply to This ]


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