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    dots Submission Name: The Old Mandots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Old Mandots
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    Scratch the surface
    so smooth and worn
    of fantastic stories
    told from the mouth
    of the old man traveling,
    of days lived longer
    solid opinions prevail
    although his body grows old
    his tounge grows stronger,
    mouthpiece to the generations
    lost to the hands of Eve.
    skin draped loosely
    upon bamboo bones
    slowly being devoured
    by times hungry husk.
    listen closely
    for time eats us all
    and slowly digests us
    into the broad body
    of history's muscle.





    Submitted on 2006-12-14 09:57:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the beginning made me think of a table i have...its so old but full of memories...
    just the whole thing brought vietnam into my mind...my uncle tells old war stories and the bamboo bones (dont know why) really made me think of them...
    this piece is like something i would want read at my funeral...maybe im getting something else out of this but its seems to have like...pride??? in it...im not sure anymore, but i like it
    rhaine
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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