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    dots Submission Name: The Symphony of a Christmas Pastdots
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    Author: SavedDragon
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       christmas is coming people..just wanted to bring in the spirit. Enjoy! ;-)


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    dotsThe Symphony of a Christmas Pastdots
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    I can remember making snow angels
    Ah yes! A time of distant days
    It was when the mistletoe dangled
    And the naked trees swayed

    It was when houses glowed brightly
    With lights that had shined
    And knitted hats worn tightly
    With patterns intertwined

    I can remember the breeze
    The whispering wind
    When the tree leaves would cease
    And the snow had fell in

    It was the warm memory
    Of the moments we laughed
    Ah yes! It was the symphony
    Of a Christmas past.




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 12:08:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, a fine recalling of Christmases past, indeed, worthy of a Jacob Marley, though not an Ebenizer Scrouge! bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2007-01-02 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      I realy liked this it brought me back to christmas...even as far back as when i was a little kid. This was very awsome. i agree with the quote pulled form abover made me very warm incozy thinking about times i played in the snow and had the hats on with all the christmas lights all around. I realy liked;

    "I can remember making snow angels
    ah yes! A time of distant days
    it was when the missile toe dangled
    and the naked trees swayed"

    This was the sectin that realy brought me back to being a kid and alll the happy memories that were there! This was a great piece that defenitly prevoked memories of christmas. Keep up the great work!!
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by FLHgg | [ Reply to This ]
      really nice poem you have written, rhymed and flowed real good, (It was when houses glowed brightly
    with lights that had shined
    and knitted hats worn tightly
    with patterns intertwined) this stanza gives a nice cosy atmosphere of christmas, home with the family etc. bye gerry
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]


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