I realy liked this it brought me back to christmas...even as far back as when i was a little kid. This was very awsome. i agree with the quote pulled form abover made me very warm incozy thinking about times i played in the snow and had the hats on with all the christmas lights all around. I realy liked;
"I can remember making snow angels ah yes! A time of distant days it was when the missile toe dangled and the naked trees swayed"
This was the sectin that realy brought me back to being a kid and alll the happy memories that were there! This was a great piece that defenitly prevoked memories of christmas. Keep up the great work!!
really nice poem you have written, rhymed and flowed real good, (It was when houses glowed brightly with lights that had shined and knitted hats worn tightly with patterns intertwined) this stanza gives a nice cosy atmosphere of christmas, home with the family etc. bye gerry