I liked the freedom you took with this piece. The mixture of feelings was interesting as was your choice of words. I just have a question on your meaning of line 4. It sounds very good but im sitting here wondering what you mean't. If you could tell me that would be great. I feel dumb not understanding but i realize the first person to know is the one who wrote it right?
I like this write a lot Rhaine This is very emotional and to me speaks of a young girl who against her soulmates better advice did something that now is preventing two hearts that were meant to beat as one from coming together The Good Thing is that you included tears because to me Tears are the begining of the healing process They wash away the sadness that is trying to corrupt your Heart Excellent Job I look forward to reading more from you God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron