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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 932
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    Bytes: 294



    Description:
       A little something thrown together. Kinda really sucks but ya..


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    My tongue
    Knows many tunes
    But only half the album.
    Listening ears
    But not comprehending
    The words are muffled
    Until the lyrics are decoded
    And the words are understood
    Then my tongue can flap and sing
    To the notes of many a mouth.




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 14:11:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      love you picture by the way...
    first three lines...makes me think of a cd i just bought and i sing it outloud and dont even know the words and i just make them work...this connects to life by...following along even if you dont know whats going to happen and making your own way thorugh it...
    it doesn't suck, even if it really does suck never tell yourself that because it came from you so it has meaning, no matter how much or how little...
    i think its a cute littke piece because i just picture me and my friends trying to sing in my car with the radio adn not know the words...
    made me smile...
    rhaine
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This is another creative and very true write bye you Shelby and Shannon
    It is so true People use their Tongue to say some really nice things but also say some horrible things they didnt think about before saying
    And those words could end a beautiful Friendship forever
    I always tell my True Friends
    THINK BEFORE YOU SPEAK
    You worded this well and I really like how it is a true write
    Great Job
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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