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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 792
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 432



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       sorry, couldn't finish... will later though, tell me how yall like it so far...


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    I love him to death
    even though I don't know his name
    His eyes meet mine
    just that perfect way
    I know that he sees me
    When we pass in the hall
    I know that it's meant to be
    And we don't even say anything at all
    One day I'll get the courage
    And I'll prove to you all
    That it's real love
    And it's really meant to be




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 14:13:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw... this seems like one of those one sided love poems. It's got some real potendional(I know I can't spell).
    Let me know when you finsh,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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