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    dots Submission Name: Roleplayingdots
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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    26/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756/734/161
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 538
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 937



    Description:
       Am in a masochistic phase. Don't let the words fool you, am talking about a great lay from three days ago


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    dotsRoleplayingdots
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    giving in
    to masochistic urge
    I lie
    on old mattress
    smeared with sperm and sin
    feeling low
    in my place
    cheap whore that I am

    lashed and bloody
    like a martyr
    to my own unwholesomeness
    screaming out pleasure
    wrapped around
    a strangers flesh
    the world is small
    compared to this

    letting go I fall
    like the lash to my hips
    finding that
    gravity
    never applies
    in this state

    wrapped in vinyl
    like a doll or a whore
    I cry empty tears
    according to
    his wishes
    as I am striped
    with delicious shame
    and sticky seed

    push me to a fall
    from grace
    as I request
    and I am your whore
    once again
    my angel wings rent
    from scratched back
    and open wounds





    Submitted on 2006-12-14 15:49:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      lovely...sad a bit, but lovely....
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the word choise you have there. i love it but be careful because not all readers will go for this. but i like it koodoes
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Adden Lee | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice piece! What do you write when your dates, or amorous encounter's don't go so well?
    When the women I date realize that I write poetry, They ask me to recite some lines for them. But to never, never write about what we do. I have to give them my word that I won't.
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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