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    dots Submission Name: "Worse or Better?" The Indecisivedots
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    Author: Soulfantasia
    ASL Info:    15
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 572
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 708



    Description:
       This 'Poem' was written for a reason, we are all indecisive at times but this was made atleast a few weeks or months ago, I can't remember.

    Another reason for the creation of this poem was because it was sent to the semi-finals of a competition to winning great rewards.


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    dots"Worse or Better?" The Indecisivedots
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    It is a strange thought,
    To think if it's good or bad,
    What do they know?

    Could be it any worse?
    What if it was better?
    Why can't it be perfect?

    Why do we carry on,
    trying to bring forth something great,
    Turning out to break.

    Why do we see it,
    But we never try,
    Never to make it any better.

    We have the ideas,
    We have the strength,
    Our youth is endless.

    Everyday we think,
    What is it that we try?
    Why do we continue?

    The decisions we are given,
    are sometimes indecisive,
    We can't always make up our minds.




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 16:23:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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