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    dots Submission Name: GOD VS BELIFESdots
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    Author: hulk
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    dotsGOD VS BELIFESdots
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    The Bible what you read about God in this case relion is what you want it to be as lennon said God is a consept on which we measer our faith ! god is a figmentaion that we relay on to comfort ourselves god is like describeing Space how far does it go did it evove by gods hand i myself belive in a higher power now is it god as you call it i dont know how could there be a god called god and a god called alu or budda or jesus relion is mind control i hate peps telling me to reley on something that may be or may not be dont buy into these sick twisted bible freaks




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 16:30:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you might want to think about conventions and format. i love how you refer to lennon. whoohoo!!!
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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