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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1013
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 587



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       Just Sumfin Random I Wrote


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    I Wanna Hold You Till The Day I Die
    I Wanna Sit Here And Never Cry
    Of All The Things I Ever Did
    Loving You Would Be The Best
    I Promised Myself I Would Always Be There
    You Taught Me Love Was Worth The Risk
    And Ingnorance Is No Longer Bliss
    Im Glad You Were The One I Chose
    You Proved There Was A Point For Life
    So When You Fall And Start To Cry
    I Will be There By Your Side
    And When You Give Up And Want To Die
    I Will Be There With A Tear In My Eye
    Becuase Without You There Is No Meaning To Life




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