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    dots Submission Name: Baby Bambidots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 132
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    Description:
       My hypothesis is, when a hunter shoots a deer, he is demonstrating his jealousy for ACTUAL predators who kill stuff with their bare claws.


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    dotsBaby Bambidots
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    trampling over weeds and twigs
    a deer fights the wind and
    her own hooves fail her—
    noisy. too noisy
    to shake the gun.

    None of us are fast enough to shake the gun.

    not even God’s alleged swansong the human race
    who of their own accord
    constructed weapons of mass destruction.
    yes. no
    man no deer no heart no thing resists
    the impact of a bullet,
    except for the spirit.

    but what good is a spirit if no one can hear it
    when it tells us what it’s really like to live in
    heaven?

    none of us can shake the gun
    and none of us can hear the spirits hum.

    Arrows and bullets and slingshots reflect
    the darkness in our hearts
    and perhaps our embarrassment because

    we want to be frightening hunters
    like lions and tigers
    but the lions ignore us
    the tigers detest us
    because we don’t have those fangs those claws
    those frightening hunter-type things.

    but we just want to fit in
    and show them who’s boss and
    eat what they eat and we wanna be like
    big brother simba.

    so baby bambi starves on his own
    as we feast on his mother
    and only her spirit escapes us.

    unconsciously we’re looking
    but the problem is
    big brother doesn’t care what we’re doing.




    Submitted on 2006-12-14 22:27:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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