Description: This will most likely sound like a random rant but it has a hidden meaning, mostly on a mistake I made involving a friendship/relationship. It helped me make a decision.... the right decision.
Friendship beats all.
I like this piece and I think the simple format is fine if that is your style. But this piece left me wondering what the event was that made these feelings so strong. You speak of innocence being lost but why? This is a good start but you might want to add more to it. It is just very general. But all in all a good start. Have a good night. -Hill