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Author: Black-Death
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idk...



I whant a bran new heart.. that whont turn black... that whont turn water to ice.... i want a heart that beats... i want you back...




Submitted on 2006-12-14 23:09:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  mark, you're an incredible writer. rawr at you. much love
denny<33333
| Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]


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