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    dots Submission Name: Will And Destinydots
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    Author: Parul garg
    ASL Info:    26/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 241/100/30
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 1126
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    Description:
       A vital lesson of life I learnt the hard way and want to share.


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    dotsWill And Destinydots
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    Destiny is a fair document,by and large,
    Till we succeed in erasing some good portions
    Or misread some important instructions
    Or skip the fine print altogether...

    This is a book where pages turn themselves,
    We have limited time to make sense
    So read carefully and whenever given a chance
    Write your statements decisevely,unflinchingly
    Because a single statement can transform The whole further text.




    Submitted on 2006-12-15 05:47:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I always thought of Destiny and Opportunity as two lovely mythical ladies who are always going in a positive direction (meanining always appearing forward, and futuristic), and who work often together, enticing and leading our lives in directions unforseen and unimagined!

    This was really excellent, Parul!
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I really thought this had a lot to say and yes, thoughts and actions do effect life - that's why I stay positive and live in the NOW

    Great!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-08-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i agree with michelle..deep. you set the perfect mood i think you were aiming for in this write. you really know how to get our brains to thinking..great work.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah so very true!

    | PRETEXT | TEXT | CONTEXT |
    | TEXT | CONTEXT | PRETEXT |
    | CONTEXT | PRETEXT | TEXT |

    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by danativ | [ Reply to This ]
      amazing to think one little thing, said or done, could change the whole direction of our life.
    anyway, great write, pretty deep.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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