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    dots Submission Name: Thingdots
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    Author: SouthernState
    ASL Info:    18/f/GA
    Elite Ratio:    4.77 - 31/21/16
    Words: 410
    Class/Type: Prose/
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1646



    Description:
       Not a true story, not just violent sex, it is meant to be rape, although the word "rape" is never mentioned.


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    dotsThingdots
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    “No. Please, no.”
    It was an endless chorus of pleading that he easily ignored. In his eyes, I was to be used in whichever way he pleased.
    “Please, God, no. Stop it. Please, please, please, no.”
    I might as well have been talking to myself, for I heard no response other than grunts, and those were not answers. They were affirmations of his power.
    It continued. For how long, I cannot say. Hours, days, or perhaps weeks. He held me there, underneath him, he held me until I was no longer me but only this Thing in which he forced himself. He enjoyed it, oh, God, he enjoyed it, that sick bastard, when It cried and pleaded quietly. And when the bastard finished, he rolled off It and smiled and with that smile a chilling promise was delivered.
    “I’ll return for more.”
    With those words and that smile and that power, I was lost forever, never to return. He did not harm me; he knew I would never tell a soul. How could I? I had loved him, adored him, practically worshipped him. Waited eagerly each day for when I might see him. He was a hero when I needed one the most. And now – this? The hero had become a monster far worse than any I had before encountered.
    All was lost, I was lost, I had lost it all. He left this Thing crying and sniveling on Its bed. He left; but when he did, this Thing, this lost and lonely girl who had once been so sweet, so smart, this Thing
    Got up
    Crept out of Its room
    Found the knife
    Slit Its wrists




    Submitted on 2006-12-15 07:49:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow...jesus....i hope this didn't happen to you...um...well...this is very very powerful...woth all of the raw emotion in this I'm kind of getting the feeling that this is written from personal experiece...but I sincerely and most honestly hope I am wrong...Anyways great write...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by redeemer | [ Reply to This ]



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