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My christmas

Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Thought i'd write a lil christmas poem as im in a rather festive mood at the mo (even though i have a black santa's hat with the words "bah humbug" on it hehe, its all for fun, ive got a sequened red hat too ^-^). much love all xxxxxxx


My christmas

Hangin' up the decorations,
riggin' up the joyus lights,
laughing as i watch the cat,
while with a bauble he madly fights,

The fresh scent of christmas tree,
and baking, greet my frozen nose,
as i sit by the fire side,
defrosting my frosted hands and toes,

I hear my mum a singin',
christmas carols joyously,
as she hangs up the candy canes,
on our beautiful festive tree,

I sit and wrap my presents,
to family and friends,
glad that christmas time has come,
round to meet us once again,

And in the hustle and the bustle,
Of all thats left to make or do,
i thought i'd sit and say a little,
christmas prayer just for you,

I hope that you enjoy this season,
more than any that've come before,
and i wish you will experience,
all the joy in the world, and more.

Merry Christmas everyone, i hope you all enjoy it and have a wonderful new year too (don't forget to make a new years wish, you never know, this year it might come true)

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  Hi Lou,
Beautiful poem! You described very well, the joyful preparations of Christmas. Good Write! : )
| Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  Aaah, this was great! It has such a "homey" feel to it, I could just picture the atmosphere there in your home! Nice write, Lou, and thanks for the Christmas Wish! Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas!
| Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  you really are a 'perky' pretty little thing, aint ya?
this is wonderful, i'm certainly in the mood for some festive fun!! i love Christmas.
hope you and your family all have a great time, sweet.

Happy Holidays!!
| Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
  Lively and festive, no doubt about it! It certainly captures the spirit .... some good rhyme here ... neatly put together with pretty good meter as well .... not much more one could ask for in a Christmas poem! Bravo! ... Bravo! ... Michael
and a very MERRY CHRISTMAS to you and yours as well! ... Michael
| Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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