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Forever and always

Author: koolness
ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80 /106 /56
Words: 68
Class/Type: Misc /Love
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Forever and always

I will keep you forever and always,
you are mine and I will never let you go!
I will keep you lock in my lil cage, so you can not escape from me!
I will keep you in a lil tiny box on my dresser,
I will keep you in my heart, mind and soul.
you will not escape from me!!
I will kepp you forever and always.

Submitted on 2006-12-15 12:00:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hehe thats so cute Kate ! i love it, such a sweet lil piece expressing how most all of us feel about the ones we love. Never let that love go hun xxx

| Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]

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